Beta Page Feedback
marmaramarmara said:
2012-02-16 15:58:29
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
bbq9600 said:
2012-02-01 18:04:36
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
The graph could be a little bigger.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
lucy88 said:
2012-01-29 10:43:17
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
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I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
mraines said:
2012-01-27 09:01:05
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
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I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
higuyjoe225 said:
2012-01-26 20:15:27
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
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I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Soph333 said:
2012-01-22 19:03:14
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
starksolutions192 said:
2012-01-18 06:36:19
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Not all all...Formatting is terrible. Reminds of web pages in the mid 90's. Kind of looks unprofessional. This sight is obviously geared towards younger kids. It could be benefit and attract a larger audience with a better layout. When you select the printable version, the formatting dosen't improve much either. The header needs to be simplified and look neater. My pages don't look professional when they print out. Also would be nice if they had the Project Guides in a PDF handbook.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
Depending on print options, sometimes text overlapping on sidebar.
PamL said:
2011-09-30 14:07:33
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Pleasing as can be :p
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
no typos. its aight
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
nope. everythings fine ;D
emms123 said:
2011-09-24 13:49:58
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
This page is awesome
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
No! All looks good and understood
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
No this place is the best
DMonsen said:
2011-09-21 12:13:18
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
The first bullet under Key Info should be changed to be clearer. At minimum, I would recommend changing "...need to, at the end,..." to "...need to, to completion..."
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
candyshake said:
2011-09-20 17:26:26
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
yes it's cool
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
no it's fine there is no problems it's all clear
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
no it is all awesome!!!!!!!
bobbyr said:
2011-09-16 18:54:52
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
yes
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
yes
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
no this is ok rnough for kids of all ages
serapeace said:
2011-09-15 17:17:00
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
yes i like new pages cause you get to edit them if there is and there isn't any thing wrong with the page
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
nope nota
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
no not that i saw or tested cause i tested all of them
imcool522 said:
2011-09-15 04:06:38
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
i really like it. it really is easy to read.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
well, i didn't get to check, but i guess it looks ok.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
not at all!
absbako said:
2011-09-14 20:42:31
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I love how it was in charts! It made it so much easier to read!
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I can't see anything wrong!!
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
Didn't check....but it looks GREAT!!!
SonoranScience said:
2011-08-27 19:35:27
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
kpenk said:
2011-08-17 22:16:35
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
It is fine, but dose not look to appealing when you first see it.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
The first sentence under Key Info needs to be edited because it is difficult to understand right away. Also some sentences under The Engineering Design Process could use some brushing up.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
mansi said:
2011-08-11 21:08:22
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
PeteWhiz said:
2011-08-11 03:08:51
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
SmileCuzILoveYou said:
2011-07-10 21:09:09
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Not anything to catch my eye. Try making it more understandable and colorful.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I did not find any problems with the writing, very nicely written!
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
No problems! Very pleased
audreyln said:
2011-07-08 10:43:39
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Could be improved with some color or maybe a diagram of the process to go along with the table.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
The wording of the first bullet point under "Key Info" was confusing. I had to read it twice to understand.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
No issues.
drjimd98 said:
2011-07-05 13:33:39
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Website is not that intuitive.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
No problems noted.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
No Problems noted.
swu1798 said:
2011-06-28 11:51:53
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Kind of dull but otherwise clear and straightforward
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
mesarose2 said:
2011-06-23 14:51:44
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
You need somthing to pop, to get people's attention. Maybe you could put some words, like, jump back and forth,in a mew font or color, to get more people to want to do the project.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
No, I did not. I think you did a wonderful job a wording it and I didn't see anything wrong.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
Nothing. Again you did a wonderful job.
khg2123 said:
2011-06-10 13:41:27
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
The two column approach is very effective. It would be nice to have, in addition to the text, a diagram showing the process as a cycle, which is how many students learn the engineering design process.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
The bullet points under "Define the Problem" and "Do Background Research" are very easy-to-read and helpful; maybe consider putting some of the other text into bullets.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
All links worked fine.
carlapaola14 said:
2011-06-07 16:25:48
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
edgellmh said:
2011-05-20 10:32:12
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I like the templated approach very much. I used a similar approach for teaching proposal writing.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
The problem solving outline presented is certainly traditional but is not what I have recommended to my own lab and class students. Problems have generally not been solved either because the technology is inadequate or because the field believes something to be true that is not in fact true. If one researches the problem area straight off one is likely to internalize the perfectly reasonable but perhaps erroneous assumptions of the field. Consequently prior to researching the problem area I recommend that problem solvers propose their own solution. That way, the problem solver becomes ego invested in their solution and hence more prone to evaluate assertions found during the research that mitigate against their own solution. In addition, the problem solver discovers whether the problem is attractive and of the type with which they like to work. I appreciate that presenting a non-traditional approach in your situation may not work well but I felt compelled to make this point.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
The 'Finding Information' page did not have a review link.
tentrillion said:
2011-05-17 20:32:10
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I think it would be easier to have the engineering design cycle consist of high level steps "Design", "Build", and "Test". Most of the steps before the last two given in "Key Info" could be lumped into "Design".
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
wjozsi1 said:
2011-05-11 15:29:55
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
All links working well
tiorukus15 said:
2011-05-03 19:00:07
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Cool
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
No
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
No
debbieemailagain said:
2011-04-29 19:06:08
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
Nice addition to the ScienceBuddies website.