Help needed: Ozone testing
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Re: Help needed: Ozone testing
Please ignore the graph in my previous email . The legends were missing in my previous attachment.
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Re: Help needed: Ozone testing
Hi Lakshu,
Thanks for the well wishes! You did some really nice work with the chart.
I have a couple of suggestions for you to consider:
1. For the title of the graph, I would suggest keeping it short and to the point. Typically, the title of the graph should tell you what's on the y-axis and x-axis. In this case, you may want to consider shorten it to " Average Ground Level Ozone Level vs. Distance from Major Highways in St. Louis, MO"
2. For the Y-Axis, I would suggest moving the the LEGEND on the right over to the left side of the graph. This way, the readers can see what those levels mean immediately. Also, I would suggest matching the Y axis title to the title of the graph, i.e. instead of "Average Ozone Level Concentration in parts per billion (ppb), I would suggest " Average Ground Level Ozone Concentration in parts per billion (ppb)"
3. For the X-Axis, it seems a little too busy to me. This may be just because of the page size. However, if this is the final size of the graph, I would suggest that you remove the minor scale from the graph (0.2) and just keep the major scale (0, 1,2,3,4,5,6)
Best of Luck with your project and Have a Great Holiday Seasons!
Willey
Thanks for the well wishes! You did some really nice work with the chart.
I have a couple of suggestions for you to consider:
1. For the title of the graph, I would suggest keeping it short and to the point. Typically, the title of the graph should tell you what's on the y-axis and x-axis. In this case, you may want to consider shorten it to " Average Ground Level Ozone Level vs. Distance from Major Highways in St. Louis, MO"
2. For the Y-Axis, I would suggest moving the the LEGEND on the right over to the left side of the graph. This way, the readers can see what those levels mean immediately. Also, I would suggest matching the Y axis title to the title of the graph, i.e. instead of "Average Ozone Level Concentration in parts per billion (ppb), I would suggest " Average Ground Level Ozone Concentration in parts per billion (ppb)"
3. For the X-Axis, it seems a little too busy to me. This may be just because of the page size. However, if this is the final size of the graph, I would suggest that you remove the minor scale from the graph (0.2) and just keep the major scale (0, 1,2,3,4,5,6)
Best of Luck with your project and Have a Great Holiday Seasons!
Willey
Re: Help needed: Ozone testing
Dear Mr.Willey,
Thanks so much for your mail. Sorry I missed seeing your mail. I was sick with sore throat and fever for the past 1 week. Now getting better. Wish you and your family a Happy New Year 2019. I noted down your points and changed accordingly in my graph. I am done writing log book. Only pending is my project board. Thanks again for all your support from the beginning of this project. I will update you after submitting my project in school which is on Jan 16th.
Thanks,
Lakshita
Thanks so much for your mail. Sorry I missed seeing your mail. I was sick with sore throat and fever for the past 1 week. Now getting better. Wish you and your family a Happy New Year 2019. I noted down your points and changed accordingly in my graph. I am done writing log book. Only pending is my project board. Thanks again for all your support from the beginning of this project. I will update you after submitting my project in school which is on Jan 16th.
Thanks,
Lakshita
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Dear Mr.Willey,
Finally I submitted my project for school science fair. Results will be announced on 24th.
Thanks for all your help.
Lakshita
Finally I submitted my project for school science fair. Results will be announced on 24th.
Thanks for all your help.
Lakshita
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Re: Help needed: Ozone testing
Hi Lakshita,
Congrats and Good Luck!
Willey
Congrats and Good Luck!
Willey
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Dear Mr. Willey,
I am very happy to let you know that I got placed first in the school level (across all grades 6, 7 and . They suggested minor changes which I will be making before presenting to the regional science fair on March 2nd. Without your help, I would not have accomplished this. Thanks so much for your help and guidance throughout since I started this project.
Thanks,
Lakshita
I am very happy to let you know that I got placed first in the school level (across all grades 6, 7 and . They suggested minor changes which I will be making before presenting to the regional science fair on March 2nd. Without your help, I would not have accomplished this. Thanks so much for your help and guidance throughout since I started this project.
Thanks,
Lakshita
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Re: Help needed: Ozone testing
Hi Lakshita,
Congratulations! You did a lot of really great work on this and should be very proud of your effort!
Best of luck at the regional! I am sure you will do great!
Willey
Congratulations! You did a lot of really great work on this and should be very proud of your effort!
Best of luck at the regional! I am sure you will do great!
Willey
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Thanks so much for your wishes. I am working on making some changes to log book and board recommended at school fair. Regionals is on March 2nd.
Thanks,
Lakshita
Thanks,
Lakshita
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Hi Mr.Willey,
I am sooo happy to let you know that I won First place for Earth and Environmental category in Regional Science Fair and also nominated for Broadcom. Also I got 3rd place 'American Chemical Society' Award for all grades from 5-8.
Below is the link from Award's ceremony:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_VeIpn ... sp=sharing
Without your guidance I really would not have made this. Thanks so much for your guidance and clarifying all my questions at right time.
Thanks,
Lakshita
I am sooo happy to let you know that I won First place for Earth and Environmental category in Regional Science Fair and also nominated for Broadcom. Also I got 3rd place 'American Chemical Society' Award for all grades from 5-8.
Below is the link from Award's ceremony:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_VeIpn ... sp=sharing
Without your guidance I really would not have made this. Thanks so much for your guidance and clarifying all my questions at right time.
Thanks,
Lakshita
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Re: Help needed: Ozone testing
Hi Lakshita,
Congratulations on all your success! You have worked hard to earn them and I am glad to be of some small help along the way. Best of luck with the rest of the school year!
Congrats again!
Willey
Congratulations on all your success! You have worked hard to earn them and I am glad to be of some small help along the way. Best of luck with the rest of the school year!
Congrats again!
Willey
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Dear Mr. Willey,
Thanks soo much for your wishes. Thanks again for all your support rendered through out this project. It really helped me a lot. For Graph I got struck for long and you helped me with ideas. I will definitely reach out to you after my exams. High school projects are way different from what I have done so far Rules are different too. I need some help to start with. Planning to collect information on this during my summer break.
Thanks,
Lakshita
Thanks soo much for your wishes. Thanks again for all your support rendered through out this project. It really helped me a lot. For Graph I got struck for long and you helped me with ideas. I will definitely reach out to you after my exams. High school projects are way different from what I have done so far Rules are different too. I need some help to start with. Planning to collect information on this during my summer break.
Thanks,
Lakshita
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Dear Mr.Willey,
How are you. I had a great summer vacation and excited for starting my freshman on Aug 16th. I started researching for my next project and got approval that I can experiment with Algae. Again this is environmental related project. I opened a separate thread in the category 9-12 Environmental sciences (Help Needed: Experiment with Coccolithophorid Algae). Please help me to understand this further and help with the material findings.
Thanks for all your help as always.
Lakshita
How are you. I had a great summer vacation and excited for starting my freshman on Aug 16th. I started researching for my next project and got approval that I can experiment with Algae. Again this is environmental related project. I opened a separate thread in the category 9-12 Environmental sciences (Help Needed: Experiment with Coccolithophorid Algae). Please help me to understand this further and help with the material findings.
Thanks for all your help as always.
Lakshita