help with abstract!

[oppezie]

Hi, my project is about how music affects hand-eye coordination and I have 116 words but need 250 so can someone please help me with adding more and also tell me if what i have already sounds okay. thanks

Many people believe that it is easier to concentrate during games and sports when there is peace and quiet but, the case may be the exact opposite. This project is to test the hand-eye coordination of two children, 6 years old and 10 years old while listening to Rock music, Classical music, and no music at all. My hypothesis was that people have better hand-eye coordination listening to Classical music than all of the other choices. The experimental results did support my hypothesis by showing that Classical music does help throw and catch a ball better than other choice. The experiment also showed that Rock music helps with hand-eye coordination better than no music at all.

[deleted-71709]

I think this is pretty good. You explained your hypothesis and your conclusions, but I would suggest you use a few more words and explain how you went about conducting your experiment.