my new purpose

pete · Post by **pete** » Wed Jan 04, 2006 7:06 pm

The purpses of this project is to learn which apple browns more quickly than others. Also if the sweetness and bitterness makes the apple oxidize more quickly. Dose the level of vitamin c and pH level of the solution make a difference in the oxidation process of an apple. This is my new improved purpose. Hope you like it better than my other one. Please give me ideas how to make my purpose better or a lot better. Thank you. Bye.

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whatarush3244 · Post by **whatarush3244** » Fri Jan 06, 2006 6:19 pm

Hello, You can improve your purpose statement by combining the two sentences to make it simpler. Also, check for typos. Nice job pete! - Jenna