Hi Anny,
Thanks for the details. This is helpful.
You did a great job in background research on the composition of tea and identifying the compounds that might be interacting with the eggshells.
It sounds like you did a good job of controlling all parameters other than the tea, which was your independent variable. Can you verify that you used the same quantity of green and black tea in the experiment?. If you did, this will help support your conclusion that green tea stains more than black tea.
If you soaked the eggs in the tea for a whole day, then a few minutes' difference in timing would not make any significant difference in results. If you did six trials, then your results were reproducible, even though results were qualitative (personal opinion). If you had more than one person evaluate the results, your conclusion would be stronger. Did you take any photos that show the difference in color compared to a control (unstained eggshell)?
Eggshells are composed of calcium carbonate and teeth are composed primarily of calcium phosphate, so the chemistry is a little different. However, your experiment is still valid because the polyphenols and tannins in tea probably interact with the calcium. You should mention in your discussion that you would have preferred to use real teeth in your experiment, however this was not possible. If you decide to continue this investigation in your next year's science project, I recommend switching to something like chicken bones, which are composed of calcium phosphate, but don't have the enamel coating that teeth do.
Here is a reference article that may be useful for your discussion: The introduction section (the paragraph under figure one, mentions that tea polyphenols bind to metal ions.. Calcium is a divalent cation and classified as an alkaline earth element and it would probably interact with all of the OH (hydroxyl ions) on the polyphenols and catechins in tea.
http://jn.nutrition.org/content/130/10/2409.full
Your conclusion is good because you stated that you had to reject your original hypothesis. You should explain that green tea apparently has more of the compounds that interact with calcium, so your results are valid.
You should also add a short statement about how you would do the experiment differently, if possible. Perhaps you could use calcium phosphate as a substrate and include more varieties of green and black tea. You would also want to find a way to measure your results.
You did a great job on this experiment! Please let us know if you have any other questions.
Donna Hardy