makbak said:
2019-10-28 12:37:46
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
aashraf said:
2019-08-21 16:17:09
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Pictures should have step number from the table associated with them.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I think Fun with circuits section should be a bit more clear. Pictures in the webpage only show application with LED but introduction says one can use sound and motion. Therefore more example should be provided. Also what are the items one will get from home science tools should be mentioned, and how can one use insulating dough in the circuit should be clarified.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
pharrast said:
2019-07-31 23:35:59
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I would be more consistent about whenI use the words play dough (or Play-Doh) vs modeling clay. The project description says modeling clay is the insulator, but in the recipe the insulation is called play dough, which is the same thing the conducting substance is called.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
rpatel02 said:
2019-06-30 06:43:20
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
22natasham said:
2019-05-31 05:40:27
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
zayanbaig said:
2019-05-15 01:15:57
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
It looks very nicely formatted!
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
It looks great! Very eloquent and detailed.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
StromChaser32 said:
2019-05-09 23:08:05
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Pics nice
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
Nope nothing wrong
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
No nothing wrong
SpenserZ said:
2019-05-07 14:53:30
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
The page is pleasing to look at, making it easy to read the page. The pictures make it easy to follow along and visualize what is going on in the experiment.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
There were no typos or incorrect facts that I saw, but I did like the bold words and italics. Those helped to make certain words to stand out. These words might have been skipped over, but since they were bolded, they were hard to miss.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I did not occur any error messages or broken links. Everything worked perfectly.
huavic said:
2019-03-31 02:15:47
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Possibly align the photos to match with the steps better.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
In the introductory paragraph, in the third line it should be "electronic parts" not "electronics parts."
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
PlasmaRules said:
2019-02-22 16:57:23
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
At the end of paragraph one the : is confusing
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
wormlife said:
2019-02-13 23:38:24
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
agtuberjoy said:
2019-01-09 18:52:43
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
Maybe explain the bigger words, like insulator, and conductor... for the younger kids.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
booraharjot said:
2019-01-07 17:04:51
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Yes, this page was formatted correctly.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
Yes, the writing is clear. The steps in the table are clearly written and easy to follow.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
No, everything seems fine.
agirma9913 said:
2019-01-07 03:21:29
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
Yes. Very visual and intriguing. I didn't know this was possible.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
All good.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
Nope
probiotics said:
2019-01-05 18:49:00
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
The ending of a paragraph with a ":" makes it a bit confusing to the reader.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
mahaasim said:
2018-12-13 02:31:19
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
When you write, The electro Play Dough kit available ,you need to add it between kit and available. After writing, Home Science Tools, put a period and start the next sentence with It contains all the electronic parts....
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
739e0a848b1d412382be5254e2e4d858 said:
2018-12-01 17:38:29
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
hamburgertheplant said:
2018-11-28 08:35:01
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
Definitions for the words in italic would improve understanding
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
amshurygailo said:
2018-11-21 08:08:14
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I might readjust the table formatting so that the "ingredients" column has more room, or eliminate the ingredients column and move all of the ingredients above into a list so that it's more like a typical cooking recipe (for the conudcitve play dough table at least).
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
In paragraph "Fun with Circuits," delete comma before "below,"
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
taylaskye said:
2018-11-07 22:26:06
Is the page formatted correctly with a pleasing appearance?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Is the writing clear? Did you find any typos or incorrect facts?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.
Did you encounter any error messages, broken links, or other problems?
I didn't see anything wrong; everything looks fine.